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Tuesday, 27 October 2009

Plus 4 - Crime Watch


Write about a crime you've either witnessed, seen on TV or heard of. It can be any sort of crime: a murder, a kidnapping, a robbery, etc...


Include as many details as possible about:
- where the crime happened
- why it happened
- how it happened
- what happened to the criminals

8 comments:

  1. The teacher Walter is sooooooo hootttt!

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  2. Guilherme Fontinele4 November 2009 at 10:03

    Once a saw two men getting aproach to a friend of mine who was smoking in front of the building he lives, one of them had a broken botle in the hand, they assaulted him, this man hit him with the botle and once he was down the two men continuated to assault him on the flor, kicking him, all the neighbourhood was at the windows looking and screaming and calling the police, I gave my mobile to mi friend in order to him call the cops. But they tooked too long to arrive and so, I followed a man and my friend followed the other, but they were fasters and we lost them on the dark streets of "south wing" that night. The cops weren't able to find their hidding place.

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  3. A while ago an american guy was on the news and end up commiting a crime with a tradgical end.
    This guy was a tipical geek from the university and some of his school mates used to practice bullying with him.On an unespectable day he took his father gun and ran suspiscously to the school.He was sick and tired of his mates messing around with him all the time.That's when he took the wrong descision: he decided to have his revenge.Without thinking a bit more about his descision he murdered the most part of his "friends" driving the campus to a complete caos.When he realised what he had just did he commited suicide.
    He was berried inside the campus.

    Emília

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  4. Last year two guys started to rob a car in front of my building, probably after the car sound system.Some people called the cops and they arrived before they finished robbing the sound system.They were probably taken to jail.

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  5. Last year two guys started to rob a car in front of my building, probably after the car sound system.Some people called the cops and they arrived before they finished robbing the sound system.They were probably taken to jail.

    Pedro

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  6. Last year two guys were trying to rob a shop. One guy pointed the gun for the shop assistent and asked her the money from the shop, but she didn't gave and the other shop assistent try to call the police. So the guys assaulted the two girls who worked in the shop. One of then stayed wound in the floor in panic, and the other one was killed. The blurgars ran away with the money. Fortunality, one women who was walking at the streets saw everything and call to the police. The police arrested the burglars and they went to jail.

    Marcella - Plus 4.

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  7. When I was twelve I asked my mother to leave me in a newsstand near my grandmother's house before she went to work, so that I could buy something and then go walking to visit my grand parents. I bought a magazine and when I was almost getting to the house a young guy approached me with a knife and said "give me any money you have". I gave him the twenty reais I was carrying and he went away. That's how I was mugged.

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  8. Last week, my mum while it came to my house was surrendered by an burglar who was armed with a knife and forced her, my father and my grandma to stay locked in a room while the thief thief mobile phones, a sum of money and personal documents.After 1 hour the man left.
    Past the fear, we went to the Police station and made a Police report. I hope this man is arrested.

    Fernanda Gomes - Plus 4

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